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Thursday, 16 September 2021

My writing

 WALT make a story about the ocean 

This week we had to make a story about the ocean here it is 

The wind howled like a wolf at the full moon. Lightning licked across the evil sky: a serpent tongue tormenting the clouds. The earth began to shatter waves like mountains crashing down on them; they would have to sprint like cheetahs chasing down their prey so they wouldn't sink like a bird at sea. lost and nowhere to go.


BAM! Something hit the ship like a hippo shot out of a cannon. It was land! A rocky hill filled with jagged rocks I rushed down to the hull. The water was pouring out as if you stabbed a balloon. I grabbed the spare wood and nails and hammered it with panic flowing through my body.


I went up too the deck and the endless abyss of dark clouds had faded. It looked like a massive wave of clear blue sky washed over us. A mountain of relief had overcome us. We had survived one of the greatest storms I had ever encountered. We were like an ant adapting to any environment we finally saw land! I never want to go on a boat again. THE END                    

Tuesday, 14 September 2021

Reading task

WALT  make a blog post about your reading task



 This week we had too read a book and make a chart of the word what we think it meant and what it meant and what it is in a sentence here it is if you want to see it  The work

Monday, 30 August 2021

The Walk

 This week we have to talk about something we did outside and I am going to tell you about it so when I woke up what I did was wash my face and get up then my dad told me "come on lets go for a walk with taikarowa" he was my little niece who was one so we had got his little bike where we can stroll and went out we had to go up hill because we lived below sea level and right next to the beach there we lived on a round about but luckily we had a little shortcut which shot straight though so we went that way taikarowa was having a blast on his bike we then had gone to a hill where the beach was what had happed was that there were really rough tides so it brought in seashells and and the erosion made it so that there was a tiny hill you had to walk up we had gone to the beach and sat on the shells it was really cool we then went back because it was a little bit windy and then relaxed.

Friday, 27 August 2021

Wordfind

 This week in lockdown I had to read a book about space and then chose ten words I thought were interesting or I didn't know. You then had to write down there meaning. I then had to make a word find with those ten words and I made it 15 words by 15 words so that it was not to easy and not too hard here it is if you want to try https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1z4MMJEw7Fep7U88KY0v8H2JijcLY8qSQ/edit#slide=id.geaebeaca0c_0_29  


Reflection 

What did I think I do well?: I think I did well on my word find

what could I do to make it better: Make a list next to my word find of all the words

Have you done a word find before? If you have send me a link of it so I can try it!

Friday, 30 July 2021

The dissapearence

 WALT  Making a story about things dissapearing 

This week we had to make a story about things dissapearing this is my story I really liked my story.

   The Disappearance...

This is Bob. He lived a boring life and a boring family. He had  two sisters and two brothers. He was a middle child his parents would usually forget about him but little did he know that he was something that would change his life forever.


He woke up like everyday, went to  school and did math he hated math because he wasn't good at it but after that class he had art which was the complete opposite of math because he loved it then he had lunch with his only friend Jim they went out to play, they went to there secret hideout in school it was a tent they got from home, pillows from class and food crumbs and as they went in they saw a golden cup.


 “Woah what's that” Bob said  “it looks like a magic genie lamp” Jim exclaimed  it looked like the sun  shineness  like someone had cleaned it for years“i'm going to shake it” “you sure?” Bob said as Jim shaked it a magic genie popped out “hello I am a magic genie I will give you both 1 wish. “Okay I wish for infinite wishes” Jim said confidently “no” the genie said “awww” said Bob sadly The boys thought hard, then...


 “I want the school to disappear” said Bob okay the genie said and BLAM and the whole school disappeared there was world wide panic and everyone was scared that someone can destroy the world and that people are turning bad  days later  the other boy Jim went to the genie at the edge where the genie resided  and said “I want you to turn everything to normal”  the boy waited for an answer holding his breath the genie  said “okay”  and everything went back to normal and the boys breathed a sigh of relief and learnt to not do things that could be bad and to think before doing anything.


-Rusty 

“Hey Xavier I really like how you add all sorts of punctuation and each paragraph!” I think you did a really good job and… ._. Ah yes I know And I like how you added tons of writing and very good grammar. Bye Rusty

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Reflection
What did I do well: making my story long

What story's do you have?

Tuesday, 27 July 2021

Multibles and factors

 WALT talk about you learning 

This tuesday we have learn about Multibles and factors and we watched a video on how to do it here it is https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1qPfLkOEuYY 

Reflection 

How did you go? I think I did very well

What did you find difficlt? The factor and how you would divide.

Thursday, 1 July 2021

The locked door

WALT use the POWER writing process

This week we had to make a story about a door and what could happen here it is it was alot of fun and I could use alot of creativeity  here it is As I'm walking to school I think about how there is a  lock door at school. I keep wandering until I reach school and that door stares at me, tempting me. Kids have said that there are red eyes staring at you but, I think that's a lie there are people who go in there but, still it lies a mystery as I go to class we go to class we go to assembly the principal mr peppa pig says that we have something  special for you tomorrow which seems cool so I was quite excited then I went to math,reading and writing I then go home and do the usually then I read a book and go to sleep I  wake up to any alarm go to school and the first thing I see the door is unlocked! I step in and… three is a  clean bathroom ! It's quite cool. The principal tells us all about it. Those kids had a really good imagination.

I hope you liked my story tell me your own story!