My writing

 WALT make a story about the ocean 

This week we had to make a story about the ocean here it is 

The wind howled like a wolf at the full moon. Lightning licked across the evil sky: a serpent tongue tormenting the clouds. The earth began to shatter waves like mountains crashing down on them; they would have to sprint like cheetahs chasing down their prey so they wouldn't sink like a bird at sea. lost and nowhere to go.

BAM! Something hit the ship like a hippo shot out of a cannon. It was land! A rocky hill filled with jagged rocks I rushed down to the hull. The water was pouring out as if you stabbed a balloon. I grabbed the spare wood and nails and hammered it with panic flowing through my body.

I went up too the deck and the endless abyss of dark clouds had faded. It looked like a massive wave of clear blue sky washed over us. A mountain of relief had overcome us. We had survived one of the greatest storms I had ever encountered. We were like an ant adapting to any environment we finally saw land! I never want to go on a boat again. THE END