Playground Writing

WALT upload a post about one thing we did today.

Yesterday we did a playground writing where we had to explain about how the Juniors  got a brand new playground With different parts about it. Like how it was constructed and how happy the  Juniors  were when they got a new playground, and it was a cooperative  google docs with everyone doing it. The one I had done was the how happy the Juniors  was when they saw there brand new playground.

Reflection.

What did I learn? What I learnt was how the playground was built.

What  did I enjoy? I enjoyed that everyone was in the same google doc 

What could I improve on? I think I could improve on my grammar because I dont know when to put a comma.

 

Maitai bay brochure

 WALT upload my learning to my blog post.

Last week we had to make a brochure about when we went to Maitai bay and went looking for fish. We had to buddy up and my buddy was Rusty to make the brochure. What we had to have was, What sea life was there, what the rahui has achieved and what is Maitai bay. You could also say what activities you could do there. 

 

Reflection

What did I learn?: I learnt all types of things I didn't know like  that there was a rahui there and was helping out Maitai bay make sea life come back.

What did I find challenging?: What I found challenging was what sea life was there and explaining what Maitai bay is.

What could I improve on?:  Explaining The part where it says, what has the rahui achieved so far.

Have you seen one of these fish before or caught one that was on the brochure?