Yesterday we did a playground writing where we had to explain about how the Juniors got a brand new playground With different parts about it. Like how it was constructed and how happy the Juniors were when they got a new playground, and it was a cooperative google docs with everyone doing it. The one I had done was the how happy the Juniors was when they saw there brand new playground.
Reflection.
What did I learn? What I learnt was how the playground was built.
What did I enjoy? I enjoyed that everyone was in the same google doc
What could I improve on? I think I could improve on my grammar because I dont know when to put a comma.
Hi I am Naweed, I really like how you explained about the playground. I also like the image that you put. I learned you were writing an article to publish. I enjoyed how you wrote names of the people that had a job to do.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you can add less images because there were so many! Check my blog at https://wpsnaweeds.blogspot.com/.Blog you later.