This week we have to talk about something we did outside and I am going to tell you about it so when I woke up what I did was wash my face and get up then my dad told me "come on lets go for a walk with taikarowa" he was my little niece who was one so we had got his little bike where we can stroll and went out we had to go up hill because we lived below sea level and right next to the beach there we lived on a round about but luckily we had a little shortcut which shot straight though so we went that way taikarowa was having a blast on his bike we then had gone to a hill where the beach was what had happed was that there were really rough tides so it brought in seashells and and the erosion made it so that there was a tiny hill you had to walk up we had gone to the beach and sat on the shells it was really cool we then went back because it was a little bit windy and then relaxed.
Morning Xavier, It's really nice that you have time to go for a walk on the beach. We are very lucky up here living so close to many beaches. Great to hear you are enjoying being outdoors.
ReplyDeleteHey Xavier i really like your blog post. maybe put bullet points with the things you did. It was still really good i'm looking ford to your next ones.
ReplyDeleteHey Xavier I really like your blog post and how you explained it to us!
ReplyDeleteThe thing what you can improve on is adding a bit more exiting thing to your story and add more punctuation.
Over all good job Xavier!