WALT Making a story about things dissapearing
This week we had to make a story about things dissapearing this is my story I really liked my story.
The Disappearance...
This is Bob. He lived a boring life and a boring family. He had two sisters and two brothers. He was a middle child his parents would usually forget about him but little did he know that he was something that would change his life forever.
He woke up like everyday, went to school and did math he hated math because he wasn't good at it but after that class he had art which was the complete opposite of math because he loved it then he had lunch with his only friend Jim they went out to play, they went to there secret hideout in school it was a tent they got from home, pillows from class and food crumbs and as they went in they saw a golden cup.
“Woah what's that” Bob said “it looks like a magic genie lamp” Jim exclaimed it looked like the sun shineness like someone had cleaned it for years“i'm going to shake it” “you sure?” Bob said as Jim shaked it a magic genie popped out “hello I am a magic genie I will give you both 1 wish. “Okay I wish for infinite wishes” Jim said confidently “no” the genie said “awww” said Bob sadly The boys thought hard, then...
“I want the school to disappear” said Bob okay the genie said and BLAM and the whole school disappeared there was world wide panic and everyone was scared that someone can destroy the world and that people are turning bad days later the other boy Jim went to the genie at the edge where the genie resided and said “I want you to turn everything to normal” the boy waited for an answer holding his breath the genie said “okay” and everything went back to normal and the boys breathed a sigh of relief and learnt to not do things that could be bad and to think before doing anything.
-Rusty
“Hey Xavier I really like how you add all sorts of punctuation and each paragraph!” I think you did a really good job and… ._. Ah yes I know And I like how you added tons of writing and very good grammar. Bye Rusty
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