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On the 19/8/20 I did a reading task. I read a book called Olden Days. This book is where time travellers come and see all the stuff in the past but for us it is now. The task we had was to pretend that you came back to your old school 15 years ago and talk about how it has changed and the differences.
Reflection
What did I enjoy? I enjoyed when we wrote because it was very free and write anything you want.
What did I do well? Maybe the creativity and how you can do anything that goes with it.
What should I improve on? The descriptive writing and add more doing words.
What would you think if people came from the future?
Kia ora. I am Savenaca from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your reflection and your sentences explaining what the book was about.
I learnt that you have been reading a great book. If people came back from the future I would be confused because I could see myself grown up.
Maybe you could use more doing words.
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